tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post875896699598616551..comments2023-04-10T16:37:14.656+05:30Comments on Of Dreams and Dereliction...: तुमSurabhihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17360214508659279184noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post-17213676951260339722010-08-05T15:56:11.651+05:302010-08-05T15:56:11.651+05:30Seriously, and honestly. I have never been able to...Seriously, and honestly. I have never been able to read others' amateurish poetry, I usually have to force myself. This one just flowed into me. Thanks!<br /><br />It's extremely sad, this piece, I thought. Maybe you didn't write it thinking that way, but the way you have constructed yourself to be a product of someone's bond and self-sufficiency, someone who defines lines for you, and you love him for it, is very ironical and well, sad for me. But I guess that's what is expected of us in relationships. Gentle cords of love, though cords nevertheless. For me, the poem is a sarcastic attempt to poke fun at such understandings. And I love the imagery...loonybirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07236351944383514551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post-77873398033381165222010-07-26T15:05:16.921+05:302010-07-26T15:05:16.921+05:30सुन्दर रचना ...सुन्दर रचना ...संगीता स्वरुप ( गीत )https://www.blogger.com/profile/18232011429396479154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post-28923420738118566392010-07-25T21:29:01.551+05:302010-07-25T21:29:01.551+05:30सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति!!सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति!!Udan Tashtarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post-81490040822931604902010-07-25T18:55:38.413+05:302010-07-25T18:55:38.413+05:30बहुत खूबसूरत भाव्।
कल (26/7/2010) के चर्चा मंच पर ...बहुत खूबसूरत भाव्।<br />कल (26/7/2010) के चर्चा मंच पर अपनी पोस्ट देखियेगा।<br />http://charchamanch.blogspot.comvandana guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00019337362157598975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post-63471702142490733112010-07-25T18:44:28.081+05:302010-07-25T18:44:28.081+05:30समर्पण और बेहतरीन भाव की रचनासमर्पण और बेहतरीन भाव की रचनाM VERMAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10122855925525653850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post-27911606025866315182010-07-25T18:33:17.549+05:302010-07-25T18:33:17.549+05:30gr8 work yaar...superb expression...gr8 work yaar...superb expression...divyanshunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post-60263435327345921702010-07-25T18:17:15.647+05:302010-07-25T18:17:15.647+05:30" 'Sw' ke kitne hi paryay jaan lun, a..." 'Sw' ke kitne hi paryay jaan lun, alag nahi ho sakti tum se!"<br /><br />Very touchy. And true. I am completely mesmerized.<br /><br />You have no clue what this poem is.Amazing.<br /><br />Please keep writing.<br /><br />:DAvanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07277831252264587508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post-35268294041372530592010-07-25T18:16:42.793+05:302010-07-25T18:16:42.793+05:30Intriguing. Strikes a chord somehow. :)Intriguing. Strikes a chord somehow. :)shreyanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1403411443609539521.post-37042449872700847062010-07-25T17:35:41.905+05:302010-07-25T17:35:41.905+05:30बहुत ही सुंदर .... एक एक पंक्तियों ने मन को छू लिय...बहुत ही सुंदर .... एक एक पंक्तियों ने मन को छू लिया ...संजय भास्कर https://www.blogger.com/profile/08195795661130888170noreply@blogger.com